Term 4 goals

To be neater at writing

To achieve my goal I can practise at home and when I'm at school I can write more so I will improve.

Who can help me my mum and dad.

The things that stop or make it hard for me is the people who don't work or who disturb me.

Term 3 goal assesment

My goal term 3 was to make my writing neater. I want it to be easier to read and higher quality

Yes I did achieve my goal because I practised at home and in my spare time. I know this because when I look at my writing at the start of the year and compare it to now, it has improved.

Jamie's Mihi

He Mihi

Kia Ora

Ko Scatell pike te maunga ahou

Ko Basingtoke cannal te awa

Ko Johnson te ingoa whanau

Ko ngati moki te marae

Tena kouto tena kouto kotoa

The Castle

Once upon a time there was a king called George,and a queen called Susan. There was a leader called Jim,but he was lost in the woods,so the next day the knights of the castle went to find him. As days passed Jim never got found until one day a knight went for a walk in the woods and the knight found Jim. The knight who found Jim was awarded $100,000. Jim had found some information while he was away. The information he had found was that lots and lots dwarfs were going to attack the castle.He orders his troops to get prepared. After 2 months of getting prepared the dwarfs attacked with 700,000 troops Jim new they were out numbered but he had to fight to save the castle . He ordered some cannon and gunmen to help his troops fight. they were working really hard and thought they had won until 200,000 troops came from now were and 70 catapults came to break the castle.They were about to surrender until until 7000 gunmen came and fought back. Jim shouted to the 63rd squadron "charge at the dwarfs" . Some of the dwarfs were so scared so the knights followed the dwarfs back to the dwarf base . They took lots of the dwarfs weapons and then demolished there base. When they got back to there base they targeted the catapults.They got 1 catapult from the dwarfs. They took down 2 catapults and then there one was destroyed .They went back to the castle and fired some cannon balls and they all hit dwarfs. The dwarfs were out numbered. So they caught the dwarf leader and put him in jail and he was never seen again.